Finally…
The hissss of light rain on river,
A day of this,
After the wind,
Settles summer’s score.
Now salmon stir
In the new, sweet water.
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DRAFT 2:
Act 1: Summer’s score,
Patiently settled by the wind.
Act 2: Soft skies,
And the long hiss of light rain,
On a late afternoon river.
Act 3: In the new, sweet water,
Salmon stir.